All the people are blurred, and their backs are turned. The contrast is low. And the color palette which would be the almost negligible strong point of the photo is ruined by a cerise shoulder.
It would be interesting to see some faces. The steel of the bridge blends in with the sky... Which person is supposed to be in focus - they all seem blurry.
A little soft and cluttered. Wish you'd waited for the people walking at you, so as to show faces. Then again I don't know how folks from Brooklyn like getting their photo taken.
I'm not entirely sure what the focus is on in this photo - the child riding on the shoulders of an adult? The angle doesn't quite work for this, given that the people in the foreground are very out of focus and, for the most part, covering the key focal point. Also, the colours are a tad drab - have you considered kicking up the contrast and converting to black and white? That might really give this photo some kick. Alternatively, some colour work and some cropping to at least get rid of the man who is very close to the camera on the left would really do wonders for the appeal of this shot. Good effort!
a little out of focus... I think it would also be better with more or less of the man in blue on the left... as it is it seems like an accident he was in the picture
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