From the thumbnail I thought it was B/W...is it duotone? Nice lighting, interesting effect. Might be a bit hot on the side of the face and top left shoulder. JMO. Good luck.
i like the vignetting, but i wish there was a little bit of light on his right so it didn't look like half a face. nice duotone too. melancholytron? just guessing...
Good attempt, but I think we need a bit more light and more detail to really feel it. From what little we can see of his face, it doesn't look like much of a struggle.