Well you have captured a very nice moment there, its full of emotion and a lot of good things, but since you are doing this handheld late at night you are not getting the detail a shot like this should have.
If you would have used a tripod you might have lost that magical moment but you got the moment with some hardship on detail and sharpnes.
A good thing to do to this picture would have been applying curves and USM to the whole picture to get the edges sharp and to get the sky a litle more blue.
Well hopefully you think this is a helpfull post to you.
I really like the composition and silouhette effect captured here.
Had this shot been sharp/clear, it would have scored much higher in my opinion.
Well seen and composed regardless.
Interesting perspective, however I don't think it really works for me. Can't place my finger on it, also I would have cropped a little more on the right hand side. It looks like you were also going for the symmetric look and the right side just throws it off. Good Luck.
My first reaction was to score this low due to the technical flaws in it, but as I sat here eating my Good & Plenty candys, the story came out and I realized that despite the technical difficulties presented here, the story makes up for it.