Hi, and thank you for entering the DP People II challenge.
Your entry does qualify as a people photo, but the position that it was taken takes away from the subject.
You have a fantastic and magical digital camera. It can do wonderous and creative things for you. It was a people photo challenge. We really can't see the poeple in this photo. In order for others to appeal to this image you must bring out the human factor. One, is being able to view their faces, their body, and maybe even their clothes. All of this gives the viewer a point of reference on your subject.
You actually picked out a great subject, two older people trying to work one of those new fandangle digital camera's. The expressions on their faces would have scored higher points for you. The trees that surround them is also very distracting. Don't take a photo if you think the subjects will be annoyed by it. Don't take a photo if the subjects say no after you asked them. There are many people who are willing to be subjects. If you know these people you could have stood in front and taken your photo. If you don't know them and are timid about it, select someone else. The part of the actual people subjects you can see is the bored expression of the lady next to the man, who is taking the shot through his LCD viewfinder. That would have been an good place to focus from.
If you were trying take this photo as an abstract it also failed. Because again there is no connection between the viewer and the subjects.
Thank you for entering and keep shooting. Always keep the purpose of your photo first. In people photos you must always capture the eyes, and faces. Of course there are exceptions.
Met the challenge, but image has issues, of which I am sure you have already realized or had comments on. The tree branch is obscuring the main subjects that are supposed to be the focal point of your image. It's a bit on the blurry side too. (5)
Challenge: 10 the requirments have been met
Composition: 5 a better angle would brought the people out from behind the tree
Technical: 5 The shot seems out of focus or maybe due to the fact that the focus is one the tree rather than the people.
Creativity: 5 Just no wow or photo doesnt pop
Overall: 6
The beautiful blossoms are too blurred here, I know you seem to have tried to get the couple in focus but I believe you could have gotten both..the sign on the right is an eyesore, you should have cropped that out...
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