beautiful eyes I think the angle is throwing me off though with miss proportions. The head just feels too big for the body and I sure its due to the angle and dof of the shot.
The top half of this picture I really like, the bottom no so much. The angle that you chose makes the head seem massive in comparison to the body and it almost looks carton like. Probably not the effect you were going for. The body also seems very soft, which further separates it from the head. I think perhaps flipping her on her side a little and shooting from the side would have helped the size proportions while maintaining your focus on the head. You also might try rotating the shot, as seeing someone lying down but in the vertical position is a little disconcerting. (However everyone does bed shots that way, so marks for creativity)
Very pretty. I'm assuming the soft focus was on purpose.. it works well in this instance. A tad more contrast would really make this stand out, but this is, regardless, a unique shot that has been nicely executed. I like the angle - it really makes a person notice those lovely eyes.
Was this shot using a fisheye lens? This image looks distorted, almost as though the model's head is too big for her body. The soft focus works well here, but the distortion makes this look less like a portrait and more like a bobble-head figurine.