I see it can't decide whether it should rain or snow... so why not both... Anyways, personally it just doesn't appeal to me for some reason but I will say this is one of the times that the person exiting the photo/frame actually works better then one entering into it. As the person exiting shows a sense of urgency. Just my two bits but keep up the shooting!
Although nomally its more pleasing to the eye to have the figure entering the frame, in this case the opposite works well. Love the cold feeling and isolation. Great photo
I like the motion & the feeling that she's hurrying to escape the weather. Zooming through the snow gives such a nice effect. I think I'd prefer seeing her body at the magical one third line, though. Nice catch! [9]
It may have been better with the woman on the right side, so that it looks like she is walking into the picture, instead of walking out. That will draw the viewer into the pic.