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Comments Made During the Challenge
04/24/2005 10:51:43 PMPost actions
I like how you can see the photographer (is it?) in the right catchlight. The little white spot near the right cheek is distracting, and can be either cloned or burned out. Also a little more space at the top to see more forehead would help, I think.
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04/24/2005 02:30:51 PMPost actions
I like how you can see your reflection in your sisters eyes. Maybe just showing her eyes would be nice.
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04/24/2005 12:51:06 PMPost actions
I really like this picture, very "in your face" , I'm drawn th the directness, the unapologetic detail and genuine emotion. Very nice.
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04/21/2005 06:49:46 PMPost actions
Interestingly close composition. I would to have liked to see her forehead hairline at least. Cute subject though.
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04/21/2005 05:26:40 PMPost actions
maybe a little too close for comfort
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04/21/2005 02:37:33 AMPost actions
cute could use less croped forehead would like to see more hair
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04/18/2005 10:20:28 PMPost actions
I personally don't care for the closeness of this short, or the close crop.
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04/18/2005 11:47:31 AMPost actions
Excellent focus on the eyes, but I think the photo could use a little more contrast
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04/18/2005 09:59:23 AMPost actions
Nice shot. I like this but wish for color on this one. Still this works because you have everyting in such nice focus. Good shooting, good luck.
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04/18/2005 07:03:50 AMPost actions
Nicely done and a happy face, pretty also...
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04/18/2005 12:21:13 AMPost actions
Sharp eyes, but the extreme zoom, with black backdrop doesn't show enough personality of your subject. You also have a slight blue tint to your b/w conversion. It's always good to see the smile in the models eyes as well as with their mouth.
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