Yes, I agree that the focus is not quite on the eyes - but it was a very quickly taken shot and the only one of him taken at that time (I think his name is Hiroki). I almost didn't enter it, but I thought, what the hey, it had good comments at my PAD site.
Very nice portrait, and a very photogenic subject. The framing is very good, the tighness of the crop does a lot for the image. However the eyes are a little dull, you could try dodging the whites and dodging the (very pale) catchlights...it would make it an excellent picture. Good work.
Nice and expressive, wish you´d sharpened this a little more and focus is on the mouth and nose and not eyes as it should be, pity.....focus on eyes, then move the camera slightly down and press, the nose is always closest so it "steals" the focus..