The photo seems a little blury to me. Like she was moving while you took a slow shutter speed shot due to lighting. I would've liked to see this one in focus.
Beautiful light, and model. The very slight traces of movement on the model make me rate this a 6 instead of higher. I'd be very interested to see other shots taken the same day in comparison.
A slightly different angle to remove the harshness of the sun from the picture would have been a nice improvement. And it looks like she might have been moving. But still a good picture. 7
That bright sun in the top left is a bit distracting from the person.. if croppped out this would be a very very good shot. .. I'll still give you an 8 though, cause I'm a nice person :)
I Believe if you had cropped the left side in 2.5 cm you would still have the effect you are looking for without the distracting backlight, and still given the suject walking room
The lighting and setup is really nice... unfortunately it's a little out of focus (due to the nice but dim lighting and subsequent long exposure, no doubt)... did you use a tripod?
I like where this is going. That sun is so warm. The face needs to be lightened though and more in focus. The girl somehow is competing with the tree behind her for attention. Its a little distracting.