Love the composition, nice vantage point. I assume you added the grain for effect. Clouds got a tad hot, but ok, just slightly distracting. Very nice job. (Love your title)
To me, this might have been better in color. It doesn't seem like there was enough contrast in the colors to give much definition to the black and white version.
technically good, but there is some grain in the photo. Is this the look you were going for or to much sharpening? I think probably this is what you are going for because the locomotive is an oldy type one. 7