I think this may be my first one in three weeks so I may be a little rusty. First off I really like the idea. You got in close as well. I think the two things I would do to improve this photo are lighting and subject matter. I guess that is what you call the last one. I will start with it. I think Bart alone without the Alien game piece behind him would be better and less distractive. Ok, the lighting is too yellow for me and a tad dark. I do like that it is soft though. I know sometimes it is difficult getting that happy medium of not too bright not too dark. If anything I would have tried to change the color levels of the light. Well that is really all I have. I hope that it helped you a little. Good work and good luck in future challenges.
I think the piece in the background is a little distracting perhaps it could have been placed away from bart I'll be intrested to see how well this one does
I would have like the shot better if the object behind Bart weren't so prominent, it detracts from him being the focal point of the shot. maybe if the piece was replaced by a house/hotel it would have made him stand out more.
Normally I don't like "staged" shots of toys and such but this is a good one. I am not sure what makes it better... depth of focus, good framing. But I do like it. Nice job.
Jeez, there's a Simpson's branded Monopoly? Nice shot - except that Bart's a little too far out of frame, whereas the house is on the strong line, but not the point of focus. Pulls the eye two ways.
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