i'm not quite sure what happened here, but this really seems over-processed. it has a very unnatural feel to it. i could accept it as intentional if the subject matter was a bit more griping, but, as it is, i'm kinda lost. hope this does well for you. good luck!
The colors seem a little odd and oversaturated unless you were going for a surreal photo-art effect, which isnt always easy to know. It looks like it was harsh light and so the image is a little flat also. The photo quality isnt really that good, sorry.