interesting perspective you've captured here. it's a shame the shadow areas are so dark, as it makes it almost impossible to get a feel for what is there. the contrast between light and dark are so strong that they rob the image of the details that really hold this viewer's attention.
This just isn't very interesting. I understand you were trying to capture the light, but it doesn't work on a mountain the way it might work on a specifc object like a rock or a tree