The only thing about this wonderful image that I feel could be improved is the red material on the lower right. If it were to be blurred or softened a bit, it might sit a bit better with the rest.
excellent composition, great colors. i have a similar entry that is getting hammered for it's shallow dof, but, for me, mine was intentional, as is probably yours. i like it the way it is, and imagine that that if you wanted a deeper dof, you would have done so. beautiful work, definitely something to be proud of, regardless of the score. good luck!
Great shot from an interesting angle. I like how the red color is reflected from the lips to the piece of cloth in the bottom right corner. The image has a pleasing softness with a good use of selective DOF. Superb.