this does not look like an abandoned building. In this challenge, you should of shown more color and texture..try a closeup or take the photo with better light. this photo is too dark. It seems you tried to capture light with a 15 second long exposure, and it must of been really dark there. It's just too cluttered and hard to decipher what this composition consists of. One thing I like is the frame of a doorway. Whats the light in the upper left right hand corner? it seems to be one of 2 sources of light. The 15 second exposure blew out the light and I know how hard it is to capture light and keeping everything from becoming overexposed, i tend to do it alot myself. Good job at capturing the light though.another thing you have here is a good DOF.
Incredible amount of detail for such a dark scene. Nicely focused. I know I sometime have issues with low light focusing. You did good here. The only thing is, there doesn't seem to be a subject per se. No where for your eye to rest. You have leading lines and depth into the scene, but no resolution at the end of your eyes journey so to speak...
TC
Just before hitting your score, I noticed a what looks like an off centered face within the framelike object... Kinda creapy. You get one bonus point! ;-)
I see where you were going with this shot and was well seen.
Sharpness/detail is hurting this mage in my opinion, as the right foreground straw is predominant in this picture and it's focus is off/too soft in my opinion.
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