The idea of the crop is interesting. I feel that maybe a little too much sky is included here. My eye tends to drift to the top of this picture and misses the building.
seriously, i took a picture just like this with a building that looked like that at ft.ord but decided not to submit it and good thing too cuz this one looks so much better.
The house is very dark and slightly out of focus. Also, the straight on, centered shot makes it look very one dimensional. The sky is very nice but there may be a little too much of it.
too much sky and not enough building. The building being shadowed does not seem like the main focus of the image. A beautiful sky and a great building.