Critique Club:
There is something missing in the picture. I like the shadows and the contrast between the light areas and the dark. Someone sitting on the bench, maby sleeping. And I think it would have been better if you would have taken the picture straight on the wall. Not with this angle. Just my opinion though :)
I would have been tempted to look at it straight on, its a same the Left hand windoe is cropped out a tad, not sure if this would have been possible though! Also I find the bottom shadow a bit overpowering, but I love the one running across the centre of the image, good spotting!
The composition is not very strong, and the picture is mainly in shadow. You might want to reshoot this and focus on one window when the sun is facing it.
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