the focus spot seems to be the bendle of vines in the very front of the image. I think it would have improved the image to either focus on the windows, or increase the Dof. I also find the thngs on the ground (not sure what they are) distract the eye away from the windows.
Great subject, I would just like to see a different viewpoint. Maybe if you could reposition yourself when shooting to avoid the blown out sky in the upper left and really focus in on the windows, it would be a stronger photo.
Altho one of the nicer shots in this challenge in my opinion it lacks clarity. The weeds on the outside are more in focus the the building itself. Overall a nice photo tho. good luck in this challenge.