Uh, it's my first picture here on dpc, so any critism to help me improve on each challenges I enter in would so welcome. The picture is of an "abandoned" building at Fort Ord. There are a lot of abandoned buildings there and I had fun walking around taking pictures of them, but I thought a picture of a building in general was just too...general. So, of all the pics I took, I decided to pick this. It's a wall of an abandoned building...i hope that counts...the wall is rotting, the paint is falling off, and it sort of looks burnt.
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I don't think the angle you photographed this image at is the best way to look at it....(I know this is subjective).....the problem here is my eye does not know where to land or what to look...this gives me the impression that you were not involved very much in taking the photo...(subjective again)
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