Ah! Took me a little bit to realize that you are saying that it is the beginning of transparent laptop screens. Your color yellow-orange from the lamp backgrounnds is off a little bit, making the screen seems like a filter rather then transparent, which kindof messes up the concept a little bit. But cool idea, hope other people catch it too.
Very clever photo. The lineup of the dresser is excellent, and lighting is pretty close. I'm having trouble fitting this with the challenge though. Even the title doesn't help me. 5
Great shot but cant understand how this begins or the relevance? However to improve the shot I would prefer to see a better focus on the whole overall image by getting the whole shot in focus with better use of aperture and amending the colours of the LCD panel to diplay the exact same light emitting from the light on the wall as the monitor appears to be a few shades darker. Great concept, great idea, wrong challenge.
Darn good idea. I sit in my room staring at the walls all the time trying to think of something I can take a picture of. I'm jealous because I've never come up with something this creative. However, I HATE that I cannot figure out what this has to do with "In the Beginning..." so I cannot give it the score it deserves. Nice lamp too.
Hmmm hints of an old scallywag who uses smoke, mirrors, vaseline and other jedi mind tricks. Like it, though the LCD color does not quite match the wall.
Here is an excellent example of how you can use computer to display an image on it and still not break any rules. One of my favourites. Novel approach, the only thing is the vague connection to the challenge topic. had to bump it up to 8.
This is a really nice idea, and well executed too. But I'm not seeing much of a connection to the challenge. You should definitely try this again though.
Interesting concept. Seems to be focused poorly though. Compositionally, I think it may be stronger if it were framed tighter in on the left and bottom, and if the lamp were not cut off at the top. I normally try to give a lot of leeway, and I'm trying, but sorry, I'm not catching your connection to the challenge topic?
Someone's been watching the hp commercial too much... Cool picture, but I don't know how 'see_though' or the image relates to the beginning of something...
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