This is ... well, it really isn't very good at all, I'm afriad. The colours are washed out, considerably over-exposed. The organisation of the elements of the photograph is non-existent, there's such a visual confusion of so many subjects. You lighting, being from almost exactly the same direction as your point of view, hasn't even added any sense of depth and texture to those elements, making the image flat and uninteresting to the eye. The only saving grace is that the detail is good.
The only in detail critique of your work, yet the only one you did not find helpful. What a shame.
This is ... well, it really isn't very good at all, I'm afriad. The colours are washed out, considerably over-exposed. The organisation of the elements of the photograph is non-existent, there's such a visual confusion of so many subjects. You lighting, being from almost exactly the same direction as your point of view, hasn't even added any sense of depth and texture to those elements, making the image flat and uninteresting to the eye. The only saving grace is that the detail is good.
Yum. Count me in. I'd have left out some of the background clutter and focused on the main meal ingredients. Minus the background, there is a good formula here for a dramatic still life.