you might want to try using natural light from a window to take your shots instead of flash...if you have to use flash try bouncing it off the ceiling/wall if possible
Nice idea, but use of flash has flattened the features of your models and left the background in darkness (but with distracting shadows on the walls). A different lighting set up could work well for you.
This would be a nice family snap. However in a photography challenge it is sadly lacking in technique. The lighting is very harsh (guessing onboard flash), the pose is 'startling', and the dribbles down the shirt don't help. Sorry to be so brutal.
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