CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
The composition of this is simple, but effective, I think. It is composed tight enough that there is not a lot of wasted background space, adn it is clear what the subject of the photograph is.
TECHNIQUE
The focus here is very good. Great detail in the texture, especially on the side of the face. The lighting is a bit harsh, I think, causing some of it to almost blow out. the black adn white works well to give it a feeling of notalgia, but did you try sepia tones. That may have warmed it up a little bit.
OVERALL EFFECT
Though I saw the connection to time clearly, I suspect some voters may not have. This is a very good picture technically, and I like how you have shown the effect of time more than just a watch or numers. Good work and best to you in future challenges.
karmat
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