This is my second go-around =) - I wish the tombstones did not go in a straight line through your picture... I think you could have improved the composition, however, I like your idea and I like how you did selective coloring.
I am making two passes on this Challenge. I will vote on your photo then return later(before voting is over) to comment on what I like and dislike about your shot. You can take the comments however you wish and I will try not to be mean. Just don't take it the wrong way.
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This would have looked a lot better if you would of made it all b/w and darkened it a little.
I personally don't care for the angle or composition of this shot, the line of headstones down the center of the picture is not overly appealing to me, perhaps taken from a slightly different angle.