*Critique Club*
Hello!
The first thing I am wondering is what you mean by "huge crop"... I am generally not a fan of cropping except (in a case like this) to just slide one side in tighter, if that is what you did. Whenever possible, use the camera to do the cropping for you. Not to be confusing... but I actually like the crop you used here. My focus is pretty much on your eye, which is probably what you wanted. I think the overall picture could be brought up a bit, lightened, with special care given to the lip area. That could get too bright really quick. I think the problem here is you have no detail in your dark areas. People always want to see some detail in the shadows. Everyone's monitor is different and I am seeing a blueish tint which I like for this challenge. Blue can definately indicate bored!
|
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
Photographer found comment helpful.