i can understand sitting at a restaurant table building a cream castle doesn't provide the best shooting environment, but focus is in the wrong spot. the pepper shaker has a better focus than the actual subject.
I'm sure you'll get all the same comments: "looks like a snapshot" "the shadows are too harsh" "it's overexposed in parts and underexposed in others". In short, you used a point and shoot camera with an onboard flash, right? That'll kill you every time!