The subject is very nice. The photo appears off on white balance. Was that a white background? If so, using levels or curves in PS would correct that. This comment is meant to be helpful, and it comes from someone who's never ribboned :) So take it or leave it!
Great composition howeve the focus and lighting are way off IMO. The background also deadens the image. Better focus and lighting with a lighter background would improve this image greatly. Good Luck.