I have a tough time from this image believing that these people are bored. There seems to be alot things in the photo that says different. If anything they may be tired from a days shopping. Also the distance from the lens to the subject makes it hard for me to identify with the subject. Your title doesn't win me over into believing that they are bored.
They do seem bored.
Some things that might have improved this:
--lower angle to feature your subjects
--adjust levels to avoid the washed out effect
--different cropping so that, at least, the girl's arm wasn't cut off
--a more modest border--with such a broad black border you emphasize the lack of contrast in the image
not against boarders, I think this is to much, over all qualiity of the image looks a little flat. would need to know the settings you shot at to try to help.......4
quite a muddled shot. a little over exposed and the large black frame detracts rather than adds anything to it. there's also the light/dust spot center right.
I think its obvious they are bored - no problem there!
However, your picture is slighlty out of focus and too bright. The composition is not very appealing either - it looks chaotic, with some arms and legs cut out. The borders are, in my opinion, too large. Perhaps next time you could submit a larger photo (this one is a little small) and make use of your creativity, which is lacking in this particular shot (and title).
Better luck next time.
background is distracting, even though aquariums are cool. you could have tied it in as an intersting part of the picture, but along with laundry, chips, and shoeboxes, it's all lost.
Slightly cluttered and no apparent focal point. Seems a little washed, bringing up the levels would have helped alot and reducing the thickness of the border. Still you managed to capture the bored aspect that many others have not.
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