OK image but stock wise, from what I have been seeing all about in business depictions in print and on websites, there would have been total focus on the subject and the background would be totally blurred to the point of bokeh. A vertical presentation and more height above the subect might have worked better as well, diminishing the background as it is perhaps too prominent in this. 7
This is a perfect stock photography shot and on a place like shutterstock, it would do well. Unfortunately the voters probably won't see it that way. I really have no clue what they are looking for. Good Luck! 9 (fix the spots on his face for a higher score)