IMHO, when your depth of field is narrow you have to have things well blurred, sometimes or not at all. The points in the back need to be more out, because at this half way point, so close to the eye, they spin your head a bit.
In other words, my eye is still trying to bring them into focus which of course will never happen.
I think this would have had more impact if the push pins were arranged in color lines as well. I also think it would be improved if no blank space were left in the frame. Pretty good as is.
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