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This is a wonderful idea but I think the execution could have been improved. The lighting is too irregular and the large shadowy areas on the left detract from the regular, patterned appearance. The dof is a little too shallow too. I think you might have zoomed in closer, fewer pencils (or whatever) and brought out more detail and sharpness. Together with more uniform lighting, it could've been a visually arresting photo. As is, it's interesting, but not quite there... |