beautiful lighting, interesting composition. i wish i could give it a higher vote because i like it, but i don't think it captures the nature of the challenge.
Even if my monitor was calibrated to the n'th degree I am sure I still would be able to make out this shot. Its just too dark grainy. It looks like clouds but not sure if they're off a reflective surface.
Have to tell you this image looks MUCH better against a grey background. Scores high in emotion, lil low in technique. Though this would be a tough shot to get crisp by all measures!
OK, I'm lame. I see what I'd guess to be clouds, but to be honest, I can't be certain. I guess I'll look at it as an interesting abstract. It has a very painterly feeling to it, but not so much a photographic one. I don't have any suggestions because I simply don't know for sure what you were going for.
I'm assuming a typo in the title.. I think I am looking at dark storm clouds in this photo but I'm not absolutely sure of that because there is no frame of reference for them. I'm not excited about this particular photo and I'm also not really sure if it meets the challenge or not since I'm not sure what I am looking at. I can't offer suggestions for improvement on this photo but I can suggest that you make sure that the viewer knows what they are looking at.