this really caught my eye and i like it a lot. i'm a bit distracted by the look on her face, it appears pained (which would be fine except your title suggests you didn't mean it to appear so). still, quite lovely and i would have given it an 8 or 9 had i voted.
What is that structure? It appears to be a bullet-scarred rubbish bin for discarded school children, but that can't be right. It's a very strange photograph; interesting in a pointless kind of way. I probably don't get it, but at least it captured my attention. 6.
crop right in there, we don't need to see the mud, the red hair with the green with a touch of blue to show the bus wheel would be a much stonger composition IMHO.
No doubt that this is a time passing activity for kids. I think the composition is a little uninteresting. Maybe closer, or moving her off-center would help.
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