Interesting. The expression on the girl's face furthest from the camera is really good. The only reason I know they're waiting for a train is because you told me -- otherwise, I just see a cluttered background and foreground...but I suppose you don't have much to work with when doing candids. A lower DOF might bring more attention to the two or possibly bring more into the frame.
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