Well, I think you have a nice idea going on here and a good theme, but the image just came out much too cluttered to really have that 'punch' if you know what I mean. The watch and the feathers cover a large portion of that object -- it's hard to tell what exactly it is (a tape, a large CD case, and eight-track [before my time]).
In summary, less clutter and I think the image would be stronger. |