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that's for #1 and #2, right? don't worry, you didn't get either from me :) Would have liked to have seen a bit more either transition or brightness to the background and perhaps a tighter crop on the roll to put it more on the 1/3 lines vertically. Maybe a "stream" of paper leading your eye into the shot towards the roll and a more "pristine" roll (round and smooth) would also help... |