The dodging and burning was a little bit over done on this shot. Otherwise it is nicely done with good timing and capture. Try to hone in on those PS techniques a little bit more. The dodging on the water along the bottom right "thirds" intersection as well as the dodging on the mountains in the background is the most evident. The burning on the foreground is definitely acceptable but on the right side of the water is rather obvious. Definitely a photo that can be re-worked into something better.
Kinda weird for me with the burning. I can see the exact line of where you went with it. People unfamiliar with PS may not notice as much, but thats all I can look at in this image and therefore it takes away from the meaning of the picture.