This is an interesting photo, but it was very hard for me to tell what it is... if it had been a little lighter, or not as tipped - something to make it less abstract - I would have liked it a bit more
I'll come back to look at this again later on...but on the first pass....I can't make out what it is at all! I have a great monitor too, so I wonder how it will look to some other people with darker, older, uncalibrated monitors. You may be in trouble! Goodluck.