the lighting is very harch, hence the over exposre on the record top.
also the focus appears to be on a very small spot....namely where the "-234466" numbering is on the face.
it was a good shot idea but the exicution could've been better. might i sugest in the future having lighting it indirectaly or having a dufusion on your light, also u could use a CPL to cut down on some of the unwanted light reflction.
that would be all i can think of to help correct the flaws.....
oh and take the camera back further so as to alow it to (i'm assuming) auto focus propperly on the right area.......
have a good 1.........5
never mind the focus stuff i see the paul simon part now i get it but that could still be more center so as to draw the attention to it more
still 5 |