The sky color looks un-natural. Perhaps if everything except the umbrella were desaturated, leaving it blue, would have really given this a wow factor.
I like the idea but the washed out clouds and blue sky look over processed, I would also have tried to compse the shot without the tree directly behind the subjects head maybe off to the right a bit more.. good luck
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