A bit of foam core or white paper at camera left to bounce some light back into the shadows would be nice, but you've captured the product in an appropriate environment. The effect falls apart a little at the top - the pillow and brown wall (?) don't do much to push your message, but the other elements are great.
The soccer ball works, the towel works. The book and pillow are a little out of place it seems. Most of the items have no color which works well to draw us to your subject, but the pillow is especially distracting.
A good concept here, but something is missing for me. Maybe try taking it on grass to give it the outside feel. The football might be a bit large too. Perhaps two different balls in the background would have worked better ...
nice composition and art direction (prop arrangement), lighting needs work, the hotspots on the soccer ball and the top of the product a problem, very nice effort though, the diary is a nice touch
Well done presentation of the product. I like the ball and towel but feel the item directly behind the subject clashes slightly. But of course that's just an opinion. And in any case, well done!
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