This is a great idea but let down by two things. 1. Focus on the magnified lips. 2. Selective desaturation. Sorry but recent over use of this technique has left me hating it. 7
Its such a great idea, and I give you a 10 for that. But the extra catchlights really distracted me, and if the lips were in focus I would have given a much better score. You have the vision! 7
Definitely a unique idea. Unfortunately, my eyes were drawn to the mouth immediately and my first reaction was "What is it?" The rest of the shot is well done; however, I couldn't get past the shock of the initial impact. Kudos on your bravery to take a risk, though!