I like this a lot. Not sure about its 'photographic integrity' but it just really appeals to me. It's more art than photography and thus, I feel it probably won't get the score it deserves as art usually appeals to a less wide array of viewers. Very interesting and a great concept...i hope you do well!
I was going to do the exact same setup, but I couldn't make it on time, cz I thought the dead line for the submission was today (02/14), and I had a couple of problems with my membership status.
Exactly what I was planning to shoot! Great Job!!! Just didn't like the light on the back! (9)