Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - This sort of reminds me of a flower macro. Its a good idea. I think it definitely meets the challenge. In terms of composition, there are a couple things that come to mind right away that catch my attention. The framing seems sort of crowded. What I think for this image is that the "flower" should start further to the left and open up to the wider side. In this photo, it starts about center and crowds the right side of the photo. Also they seem to be pointing a little down from vertical where I think they would look better pointing up a little. I think a lot of my varying ideas of perception regarding this shot are going under the assumption that this is simulating a blossom. As always with my CC stuff, take what you think is viable and ditch the rest :)
Technical - Well lit and well exposed. Focus is pretty good but it looks a little oversharpened to me. It looks like it might be a little grainy too which would be a distinct side effect of being oversharpened. The other processing looks pretty good.
Overall - Well conceived. There are a couple things I tweak in this image regarding the framing of this photo. I really like the light and the yellow color. Hope this could be of some help to you. Good luck in future challenges. - Inspzil |
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