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Comments Made During the Challenge
05/12/2002 10:39:00 PMPost actions
Love all the sparkling effects on the band. Wish the watchface were crystal clear... pardon the pun.
05/12/2002 05:24:00 PMPost actions
Good concept, the focus on dial is lacking the detail needed to sell the product. I don't see the story that I feel is essential to sell.
05/12/2002 02:31:00 PMPost actions
I like the starlight filter -- but the highlights are a little too bright, I think. The fact that the watch is JUST off center bothers me, as do the crooked band skewed over to the left at the bottom and the way it's cut off at the top (this only because it goes all the way off the image at the bottom).
05/10/2002 07:41:00 PMPost actions
05/10/2002 06:53:00 PMPost actions
Pierre Cardin ? The bling-bling makes it look a little blurry. You also cut off the bottom of the watch, which doesnt aid in the overall effect. I don't think the blue background works either.
05/10/2002 03:05:00 PMPost actions
05/10/2002 02:36:00 PMPost actions
nice effects without losing watchface
05/10/2002 11:11:00 AMPost actions
This is nice but the star filter is almost too much, an dthe image is a bit on the soft side. The top of the watch is a bit too bright.
05/10/2002 02:00:00 AMPost actions
Your starlight filter has taken over.
05/09/2002 01:49:00 PMPost actions
Nice effect with the twinkling, but it's a bit off center.
05/08/2002 07:18:00 PMPost actions
i see your title but i can't read it on the watch
05/08/2002 05:27:00 PMPost actions
The star pattern on the band is good. Didn't like the flare on the watch edge, definitely detracted.
05/08/2002 01:15:00 PMPost actions
This is really cool and I give it high marks for sure but I think it could be helped if it actually had a little less lighlights.
05/08/2002 08:06:00 AMPost actions
it's a great effect (star filter I assume), but I think that there you've ended up taking away from the actual watch face itself
05/07/2002 11:35:00 PMPost actions
the 'star filter' effect works very well to make a feature out of the reflections.
05/07/2002 06:16:00 PMPost actions
I like the way the light sparkles, but I think it might be a bit much. I would have liked to see the name on the watch and not the title.
05/07/2002 05:38:00 PMPost actions
Nice work, but think I would have tried to minimize the bright flash reflection at the 12 o' clock position. The rest of them make it look luxurious.
05/07/2002 04:51:00 PMPost actions
05/07/2002 04:20:00 PMPost actions
Nice shot but the star effect just seems a little too much.
05/07/2002 12:51:00 PMPost actions
Nice, but the reflection is a but much at this angle.
05/07/2002 10:31:00 AMPost actions
I htink the shiny bits are too shiny
05/07/2002 08:24:00 AMPost actions
05/07/2002 03:16:00 AMPost actions
It's too sparkly... kinda like an early 80s advertisement. I don't think the blue background sets off the watch very well, it makes the silver seem harder and cold.
05/06/2002 10:57:00 PMPost actions
i think you overdid the "shining" effect.
05/06/2002 08:09:00 PMPost actions
I know you went for sparkle, but maybe overdone. It makes the face of the watch illegible. All advertisers want the product's name to be readable.
05/06/2002 06:01:00 PMPost actions
Wow! Maybe a little overdone. Other than that, perfect!
05/06/2002 04:51:00 PMPost actions
Nice flares, but I woudl have liked to see a bit more detail on the face.
05/06/2002 02:57:00 PMPost actions
This filter you use doesn't appeal to me... but I guess that's only my oppinion...
05/06/2002 01:48:00 PMPost actions
05/06/2002 01:29:00 PMPost actions
very cool.. the only thing missing is the text to close the sale.
05/06/2002 12:34:00 PMPost actions
Nice advert, very shiny! Nice use of starry filter. Photo 9 Advert 9 Creativity 8 total 9 (what are the words on the face of the watch under Piere Cardin?)
05/06/2002 12:26:00 PMPost actions
The sparks are very nice, but the watch seems to be out of focus.
05/06/2002 12:01:00 PMPost actions
Pretty shot, harsh glare at the top of the face is distracting. Fine work here.
05/06/2002 07:56:00 AMPost actions
Use indirect light to avoid the reflections.
05/06/2002 07:50:00 AMPost actions
too dark, and the sparkles take away from the face of the watch.
05/06/2002 07:28:00 AMPost actions
i would say overdone on the catchlights, but i think this is a great effort!
05/06/2002 05:32:00 AMPost actions
Sparkle, sparkle, sparkle... Wher'd the watch go???
05/06/2002 05:26:00 AMPost actions
I like this. I think the one bright spot on the rim of the face at the top and all the sparkle don't mix with the dullness around the rest of the face frame. It's still up there with me.
05/06/2002 03:55:00 AMPost actions
This is a nice concept but the lighting is a little harsh.. The watch is off center enough that it's distracting...
05/06/2002 02:08:00 AMPost actions
uneffective cant see the name
05/06/2002 12:56:00 AMPost actions
05/06/2002 04:01:00 PMPost actions
Wow, how did you get those points of light in just the right places? I love this.
05/06/2002 03:46:00 PMPost actions