Would have been a great photo, but from just a little different angle. I find the reeds very distracting in this photo and maybe my eyes are playing tricks but the green color cast is not working for me. Too bad you weren't a little hight to take this photo.
This is an interesting view - I'm not quite sure how I feel about the blades of grass obscuring it though. The composition is interesting with a unique blend of tech and nature, and the focus is in general quite good - but I think the overwhelming green tones are just a bit too much. I would have preferred to see this in full colour or black and white.
The monochrome doesn't work here - which is too bad because it's framed and shot very well. It's a nice composition - would have given it a 10 otherwise. But it gets a 5