the focus is too sharp on the background. It makes the shot seem too flat, and the left eye is visible, and loks a little wierd how you're looking out of the corner of your eye at the camera.
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When we think of portraits we think eyes. However, all rules are meant to be broken. The face angle here works very well and the shades allude to the mystery. Bumping up.
Edges of the lipa are a bit soft in my opinion. I also wish you didnt have the sunglasses on. Eyes are the most expressive part of the human body. Use them!
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