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Lolo dans la lune
Lolo dans la lune
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Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S5100
Location: Home
Date: Jan 24, 2004
Galleries: Emotive, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Feb 7, 2005

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Canon EOS-40D
Canon EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
 02/14/2005 07:43:17 PM
She is wonderfully gorgeous. I agree that perhaps the lips could be desaturated just a tad. It somewhat draws away from the rest of the photo.
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Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Tamron AF 28-300mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di LD Aspherical IF for Canon
 02/09/2005 08:18:51 PM
this is quite beautiful. i love how the tone sets the mood and her pose looks very natural. the only thing i would do a bit differently is lower the saturation on her lips a bit. it does draw my eyes to her face but the color seems just a bit too hot.
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Fujifilm FinePix S3 Pro
Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
 02/08/2005 08:24:14 AM
Yes, shame about the slight overexposure, but I think the mood of this shot is outstanding. I like the overal composition. The hand is a little awkward but I don't notice this at first. I like the red lipstick, personally.
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Canon EOS-80D
Canon EF 17-40mm f/4.0 L USM
 02/08/2005 07:24:51 AM
shading the lips might not be necessary here. It displays a bit of portraiture brilliance, but the expression, the pose the grabbing of the leg could probably be improved upon a bit.
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Nikon D70
Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
 02/07/2005 05:02:02 PM
I think this is an improvement. The color effect is nice, kind of like a fine art style photo. The black and white was fine too in my opinion. The best thing I think you did is crop out her feet, which had been made to look way too large with the wide angle lens. Without that distraction now, the viewer is left to focus right on her face and hair. Some areas might yet be a little hot, but it's not bad at all. Good editing job!
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