i'll give you an A for effort! please take all comments for what they are, and don't take them personally. i think it is so cool for you to be trying this. the main thing is, no matter how it scores or whatever comments you get, keep on trying new things. learn how to use your camera and keep on pushing your imagination. good luck!
It seems like you've taken a lot of trouble for minimal effect ... a confused mix of DP Challenge cliches, and alas it's rather poorly composed, lit and photographed as well. I'm afraid I can offer no more constructive advice than this: go outside and take a real photograph of something. Take plenty. Leave this studio rubbish to the poor souls who revel in it. Sorry. 4
clever idea, but I think it would have been more effective if you put the glas a further distance from the background to remove the hars shadow. It also seems slightly blurred...
Good attempt. But a couple of things would help a lot. Firstly, the focus needs to be shaper. Second, the horizontal red/yellow line is not really horizontal, nor is the vertical one vertical. This is a little distracting. Finally, the harsh shadows do not do much for the image- I think it would be a lot cleaner without those harsh shadows.
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