Author Thread
Comments Made During the Challenge
05/12/2002 10:31:00 PMPost actions
Greener grass, and alighnment with the horizon, would have been very helpful to sell the product.
05/12/2002 10:04:00 PMPost actions
Too washed out on top... not enuf thought/creativity in the setup.
05/12/2002 09:04:00 PMPost actions
Odd angle, it seems that everything is tilted to the right.
05/12/2002 08:06:00 PMPost actions
05/12/2002 11:44:00 AMPost actions
Pretty nice shot and I am sure there are some golfers out there for you.
05/11/2002 06:50:00 PMPost actions
I've been scouting around for some left-handed clubs...
05/11/2002 05:12:00 PMPost actions
Product shows off well but the background needs improvement. Greener grass, minus the leaves, better focus in the background or have it arranged in such a manner so it's less obvious(more sky). Overall, I like it.
05/11/2002 05:42:00 AMPost actions
Good shot.....are those fingers at the bottom?
05/10/2002 05:29:00 PMPost actions
very good---I would have tried to light the top of club head more to better enhance the size
05/10/2002 01:00:00 AMPost actions
If you'd found a patch of open shade you could have avoided the overexposure on the head of the driver and cover logo, and the colors might have snapped a little better. The patch of grass you chose doesn't look too well tended, and the white glare at R of the bg and dark area at L (interferes with the shaft) are unfortunate. It's a good composition, but would have benefited from a bit more care in the execution.
05/09/2002 05:07:00 PMPost actions
the product needs more prominence, the head cover visually distracts from the club
05/09/2002 02:28:00 PMPost actions
05/09/2002 01:46:00 PMPost actions
Good focus. I, personally, would like to see more contrast in the colors.
05/09/2002 12:06:00 PMPost actions
why did you choose to shoot at an angle like that, i think it hurts the photo
05/07/2002 06:42:00 AMPost actions
I don't entirely get what its of but its well taken
05/07/2002 04:31:00 AMPost actions
Um... what is it? Whatever it is, the colours are horrible... green and black, blech :P
05/06/2002 10:28:00 PMPost actions
you should have chosen some nicer grass to work with, or at least remove the leaves before you took the photo.
05/06/2002 06:51:00 PMPost actions
If you're selling the club, why is it dirty and buried in the grass?
05/06/2002 01:36:00 PMPost actions
i really like the blurred out background
05/06/2002 12:45:00 PMPost actions
Nice photo, nothing really wrong with it, but very little "gotcha" appeal. Photo 10 Advert 7 Creativity 7 total 8
05/06/2002 12:20:00 PMPost actions
Nice job. Would of liked better focus on the club--it's the subject not the cover.
05/06/2002 10:17:00 AMPost actions
Nice shot! I play par 2 golf that has orange rails down both sides of the fairway.. Obstacles include gorillas and windmils and sometimes a loop-2-loop on the 18th green ;)
05/06/2002 07:40:00 AMPost actions
05/06/2002 06:50:00 AMPost actions
nice pic. a little washed out though. i would have picked up those seeds or whatever they are are in the grass.
05/06/2002 05:35:00 AMPost actions
05/06/2002 04:20:00 PMPost actions
Colors seem a bit flat, but I really like the angle and detail on this.